Sunday, August 11, 2013

Beauty Lies In The Eyes Of Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

O’ charming, so kindness intense
And captivates even a heart broken
In solemnity, and who art lone?
For, sincere tender; guileless manner
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Heather Wilkins 15 August 2013

beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder so does love. excellent write

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Aswath Raman 14 August 2013

Hey hey hey! ! ! Young lover! This is a good write. But I feel you should add a couple of more lines to it, as the intensity gets broken in midway.

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Hazel Durham 13 August 2013

Written with such passion that ignite's into beautiful imagery!

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