O’ charming, so kindness intense
And captivates even a heart broken
In solemnity, and who art lone?
For, sincere tender; guileless manner
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Hey hey hey! ! ! Young lover! This is a good write. But I feel you should add a couple of more lines to it, as the intensity gets broken in midway.
Written with such passion that ignite's into beautiful imagery!
beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder so does love. excellent write