Wednesday, April 16, 2008

Beauty Is Untrue Comments

Rating: 5.0

I stare at the mirror
Look at what I see
Searching for the beauty
Somewhere inside me
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Helena Alvarez
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Sonia Irizarry 18 September 2009

Stop Giving What the heaters Want, , , , , , Positive++++ Got It! ! ! ! ! Just by u writing this Poems Make U BeautyfulllllllllllllOK tha'ts a 10

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Kesav Easwaran 30 May 2008

That won’t help much Helena! Fading away may help just only for the time being. When you again look into your mind’s mirror the image will reappear be you like it or not. So don’t count on images you feel. Count on 'reals'; on what others tell. If some one tells you are beautiful you are! Your poem though sounds sad is very soft and vibrant. I give you 10/10. Read my poem ‘Writing On’

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Wandering Scarlet 17 April 2008

very sad poem, about a broken child. well written

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