Beauty In Vain Comments

she can wear like a nervous breakdown- - - it is always a great victory when I come across a poetic gem like this one. In fact, it is so heart-breakingly perfect, I will give the entire poem a 10+++++=== and a perch in my fav shelf

Little sister always is affectionate personality for her brother. When she keeps little anxiety and sweats in tension she looks so worried but brother feels her tension and tries to recover. Beauty of little sister is built through love and affection and a caring brother always looks forward for happiness of his beautiful sister. A true brother tries to recover her from sufferings. May your little sister get God's blessings. Excellent poem! ..10

A one of a kind description of a beauty in vain. The best description I have ever read so far. And put a smile in my face. So detailed that I could almost see the layers of make up. I nearly fell off my chair while I was reading the second stanza laughing out loud. Beautifully crafted with a tinge of incisiveness. Loved reading it.. I have to put this beauty to my Treasure Chest.