Sunday, September 14, 2008

Beauty In My Eyes Comments

Rating: 4.3

Your beauty is like a summer rain
And a breath of fresh air you bring to my sight.
Bringing life to those that have withered and refrained.
And an image so haunting it stays in my mind throughout the night.
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Ben Littlechild
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yellowbell alamanda 30 April 2011

what a beautiful worth reading short poem! I'm glad I'm one of your readers..

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Les Derbyshire 21 September 2009

Nicely done! I can almost see her. A poem that creates a beautiful image in the mind. One to be read and re-read for sheer enjoyment.

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Linda Winchell 18 November 2008

Bravo Sir Ben Littlechild! Beauty in every word! Keep them coming! God Bless, Linda

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Greenwolfe 1962 23 September 2008

This is the first ten poem I have read today. What a thing of beauty . The only kind of poetry worth reading in my view. GW62

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Robert Quilter 17 September 2008

The last time i met and talked to a women like this, she openend her mouth and deflated my momentary fantasy, with a string of cursewords.anyway, the 'summer rain' and 'field of wheat' i could have done without, and so far this may seem a negative comment, but i liked the overall flow and im probably influenced by my own cynicism.However riveting..thats a strong word...

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June Feir-Cruz 17 September 2008

Nothing can stop you, Ben. Another winner and so riveting....Another 10.

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