Beauty In My Broken Places Comments
It is as ardent as a ruby
And nonpareil as a gold,
Decked with keloids like pearls
It is a pure treasure trove,
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ardent as a ruby nonpareil as a gold, nothing but the pains and pleasures blood clotted scar pinkened flesh of mine addicted by the beauty these are the points that i collected after carefully reading your poem. Thank you. You are full of ideas and imaginations. Thankyou
Heartfelt thanks for such a kind review and words of encouragement. Thank You!
A Poet's Notes would be much appreciated. For me, your wording should be simpler. And don't depend on photo to tell the story. If one is to carry scars, it is at least fortunate that some can be easily covered, and most of the face is still 'very attractive'. On tablet now. Maybe i SHALL return when on PC. Bri :)
Hi Nayanika, I came back for a re.. This very poignant write is genuinely a bloodstained esteem to behold. And Notions of forgotten seasons.. Tears and an undoused fire of anguish...
Hi Nayanika, A profound poem, articulating an immensely relevant theme. And enriched with a most apt image. A stark Reminder to the entire humanity.100++ is too short before this artwork..
Hello Sir, Immense thanks for your so kind and encouraging words of appraisal. Glad to come across you!
An insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned in heightened poetic diction with conviction. Thanks for sharing Nayanika.
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Liked this Poignant write. Deeper than Depth of pain 10+++!
Thank you so very much!