Thursday, May 5, 2011

Beauty In Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

I don't want to hide our love anymore,
having secret conversations, acting like I haven't talked to you
I want to be able to hold hands in public again, like before.
hearing you say 'I love you too' 3
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serena dalton
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Alex Perez 05 May 2011

Fun thing is tonight is the anniversary of that caused this, and I'm glad you wrote this, I give you props...keep it up

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 05 May 2011

I liked the poem. Wonderfully written. Fine poetics. I rate it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Please use the search box if the page doesn't open with the title of the poem.

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