Wednesday, November 15, 2017

Beauty In Black Comments

Rating: 5.0

The roads are many to walk
And light is seen at the end
Full of flowers and lush greenery
always you wanted to run through
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Rini Shibu
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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 November 2017

It is a brilliant poem Rini, you have astutely depicted on black with beauty. The concluding lines need great perception to answer the question. I quote... You will start to perceive beauty in black And try to scribble with ink in white Will it reach to the world of light? Without moving from this nigh Thanks for sharing.

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Rini Shibu 17 November 2017

Thanks Kumar for your comment.. Rini

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Unnikrishnan E S 15 November 2017

part3... : : Hands which holds in the darkness...... never leads the way out from the dark.. Oh! ! One reads these lines with a lump in the throat.. A 100+++

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Rini Shibu 16 November 2017

You will have lots of smiling faces around but evil might be lurking within

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Unnikrishnan E S 15 November 2017

part 2... Your poem echoes this prophesy of darkness. When you write : : You will start to perceive beauty in black And try to scribble with ink in white: : , I can imagine the teardrops in your eyes... The horror! : : Of darkness at the end of the tunnel..: : Almost losing confidence in life.. : : The sudden darkness blocks the way Pulls you from heading the run Makes you to slip at every step: : And the tears welling in your eyes blocks your vision...

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Rini Shibu 16 November 2017

Yes you are write.. Just imagine a blind person, he wish to see light but couldn't

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Unnikrishnan E S 15 November 2017

Hi Rini, There is a very famous couplet by Malayalam poet Akkitham Achyuthan Namboothiri: : : Velicham dukkhamaaNuNNee Thamassallo sukhapradham...: : (light is painful, it is darkness that is comforting..)

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Rini Shibu 16 November 2017

Thanks Unnikrishnan for reviewing this poem.. Sometimes it soothing to be in dark.. You achieve many things hidding in the dark

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Lamar Cole 15 November 2017

This is a very thought invoking and interesting poem about beauty in black.

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Rini Shibu 16 November 2017

Thanks Lam for reading the deep messages

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Dr Dillip K Swain 15 November 2017

A wonderful poem Rini.. the perception of beauty from different angle is unique..10

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Rini Shibu 16 November 2017

Thank you so much Dillip, just for a change, we always search for beauty in light but we can find lot from dark

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