Saturday, April 1, 2017

Beauty Eternal Comments

Rating: 5.0

take any moment
or face or feature and wrap
it in stone breeds awe
but allow it to run free
...
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M.J. Lemon
COMMENTS
Kumarmani Mahakul 19 September 2017

This Tank really reflects beauty of expression. Face of feature takes an interesting moment. Eternal beauty escapes from human perception but eternal beauty revives inside soul and eternally we hold this within light of wisdom. Nice and brilliant poem is shared.10

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Mj Lemon 21 September 2017

Thank you, Kumarmani. So much appreciated.

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Edward Kofi Louis 23 August 2017

To run free! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Mj Lemon 24 August 2017

Edward, I appreciate your reading. Thank you.

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Richard Wlodarski 26 April 2017

The mind is a beautiful thing. And yours is beyond that, M.J. You keep coming up with these great ideas for poems. And then you nail them...beautifully. The beauty of 10! ! ! My poetic response: Beauties From this now moment To eternity Beauty gives life freely And in death is reborn

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Mj Lemon 27 April 2017

Thank you so much, Richard. And that is a terrific response.

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Valsa George 09 April 2017

Beauty will remain beauty even if it is hidden under a stone. Beauty can never be annihilated. In death, it achieves eternity! This is how I would like to read your poem!

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Mj Lemon 09 April 2017

Absolutely brilliant, Valsa.

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Susan Williams 05 April 2017

There is always much to ponder over in your poetry and I do mean ponder! You make me think out of my box and what a liberating and frightful thing that can be! I want to argue with your conclusion but my mind keeps circling back to it and feeling a wistful agreement! Very good piece! 10++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Mj Lemon 05 April 2017

Thank you so much, Susan. I can now read this poem depending on my mood. If I'm inspired by Poe, the it can be related to death (the stone) , but with Keats, it can be a mould, a sculpture... beauty can be found in such a variety of circumstances....Thanks again; thanks so much.

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Muhammad Ali 05 April 2017

beautiful and different. I like the composition. so beauty is eternal and beyond time, but it flashes in a moment or few moments

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Mj Lemon 05 April 2017

Thank you so much, Muhammed. I like the notion that beauty flashes for a few brief moments. I have and had thought of it as something that emerges and flashes in spite of great commotion. Thank you so much.

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