! Beauty Bears A Resurrection.! Comments

'A lord of gold, gowned in white. (Crown of clouds, eyes of light) ' This is so magical, sounds like an incantation. 'Through discarding death's objections- Beauty bears a resurrection.' and this is poetry. Real poetry. My thought that you are only 17 seems somehow irreverent, almost like saying, Mother Teresa was only a nun or Walt Whitman was only a nature lover. LOL

Thrilling and really great.

You are only 17 and you are writing like this wonderful work profound beyond your age is 10 a score high enough I ask

Excellent....I loved the last stanza...