Monday, December 9, 2019

Beauty At The Corner Comments

Rating: 5.0

It was one of my regular walk days
sun, bright as polished brass,
burning away all possibility of dark thoughts.
Suddenly at the corner there she was
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Luz H.
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Bernard F. Asuncion 12 December 2019

A delightful poem, dear Ma’am Luz.....10+++

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Luz Hanaii 14 December 2019

Bernard, thank you much for the 10 and all your support.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 December 2019

This Beauty to MyPoemList. God's Blessings in Abundance. Amen.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 11 December 2019

I cite you here: her appearance had now changed, she looked renewed, polished, attractive, she seemed to shine and smile How impressively told, dear Luz. I have enjoyed very much this fascinating poem a thought-provoking poem, but yet for me a lovely poem, with excellent metaphors and most beautifully worded. Pure Poetically presented in perfect poetic language A 10 Full Score and myriad of 10's more

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Luz Hanaii 14 December 2019

Thank you dear Sylvia, for reading and commenting. I truly appreciate your support, and 10 score.

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