Saturday, October 18, 2008

Beauty, As She Passes By Comments

Rating: 5.0

Some by scorn, some by sword,
Some in lust, some in fright,
Quarrel over dusty words,
Ancient wrongs, ancient rites,
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Will Barber
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nicest way I've ever heard it said... nice

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Luis Gil 07 November 2008

Beauty, you bring us truth... but who cares now? The rat race must go on. Great poem, Will.

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William Jackson 28 October 2008

When I read your poem, I cannot help but think that the elusiveness of beauty is that it tends to remain hidden in plain sight. I need not search for it so much as open my eyes to see it close by in unlikely places. Your poem is superbly crafted and a work of beauty in itself. Sincerely, William

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Sandra Fowler 19 October 2008

I love the title. Beauty is elusive and fragile. But your eloquent pen has captured it, if only for a moment. I feel sure that it will pass your way again. A yellow flower for your last stanza. It is superb. Fondest regards, Sandra

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Kate Richardson 18 October 2008

What control. The regularity of rhythm and rhyme create a wonderful bedrock for an unconventional notion of what it takes to see true beauty. An intriguing thought indeed. So beauty, like love, cannot be captured against its will.

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