Monday, September 15, 2008

Beauty Arises Again. Comments

Rating: 5.0

From deep and dead places,
Where lurking fear catches,
Unwary and lonely,
The souls who dare enter,
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Chris Newlash 31 December 2008

This is just a lovely poem. I thank-you for reading my poem also.

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 27 September 2008

What is beautiful, will always be beautiful, even when we think the years take it away, beauty is eternal a god given gift time it's self can not take away.. Andrew 10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 25 September 2008

My 10 for the poem. Last four lines are wonderful!

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Kesav Easwaran 24 September 2008

Darkness in life giving way to dawning beauty...' Clutching still crutches means much more than weakness’...a line most revealing... an excellent poem, Fay 10

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Sandra Fowler 21 September 2008

The true poet must never be afraid to give him or her self away in words. You are very genuine. Strength for the journey, brave friend. Kind regards, Sandra

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David Threadgold 15 September 2008

Hi Fay. A very emotional piece which must have been very difficult for you to write, but thankfully the darkness subsided. Powerful and well written **10** Regards Dave T.

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Ency Bearis 15 September 2008

a great poem...nice write... Ency Bearis

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

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