Golden sands of sifting time
Spills dna silt to expose,
Helen, Mona and Norma Jean
Guided firm by natures repose.
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Ken, you've written this remarkably well my friend....we see beauty under many layers...........lovely piece
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder and you behold it artistically well. Good Genes are a luck of the draw :) Thank you for sharing.
beauty are in the eyes of the beholders..it runs in their blood..grace
since time, life is in clay from which arises beauties, and beauties return to clay to arise again as roses. a poem with wonderful imagery.
Nice imagery and metaphors used........beauty truly amazes everyone! ! !
Very beautiful Sir! Images, imagery just fascinating...........
vibrant imageries inside, Ken...beauty has always been a reason to rejoice forever, ...thanks...10
Ken my friend, what a beauty.... A 'blooming'.....lovely...... A fresh vibrant piece that flows tenderly with lines that sit in the heart..great work 10++
wow Norma Jean ill describe her as 'ooooooooomphatic' can one forget her charm and beauty --10 anjali
Beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder and you behold more than you seem to......luck and blessings............arya
This is a different one Ken.. I mean very beautiful and shows a different aspect you as a writer.. lovely poem. lovess shan