Saturday, June 29, 2013

Beauty And The Body Comments

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When the body was strong and stout,
The mind was soft and fickle,
It was indifferent to seeking beauty.
It was complacent.
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Khairul Ahsan
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Edward Kofi Louis 28 August 2020

Mind and body! ! ! Musing along with life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Amitava Sur 08 April 2014

A beautiful mind when it is, it is happy in appreciating beauty (inner) even the body does not know then. ... true

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Khairul Ahsan 01 May 2017

@Amitava Sur, Thanks for reading my poem and leaving a comment here. Sorry to have replied to the comment so late!

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Khairul Ahsan 04 April 2014

@Lasoaphia Quxazs Thanks for reading my poem and sharing your thoughts on it.

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Khairul Ahsan 04 April 2014

@Neera Lollbeeharry Thank you very much for reading my poem and sharing your thoughts on it. I am elated and enlightened by your appreciative and thoughtful comment.

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Khairul Ahsan 04 April 2014

@Katerina Richmond Yourself being a teenager, you've described their emotions so well! 'What will we want next? We can never tell.' - True!

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Khairul Ahsan 04 April 2014

@Beauteous Victory Thanks for your comment on my poem. I am honored and elated. Yes, when I write, my heart wields the pen (keyboard) .

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 02 December 2013

I thought like this for a long time, but now I am happy to found so much wisdom

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Neera Lollbeeharry 16 November 2013

Thought provoking... Beauty is skin deep I think. A beautiful mind seeks beauty within itself and that's true beauty- Wisdom.

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Katerina Richmond 10 November 2013

Yaaaay! So short but still a good peice

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Khairul Ahsan 28 September 2013

@ Samanthia Moore, Thanks for the compliment.

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Samanthia Moore 09 August 2013

You are on fire...and yes that is a compliment.

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Khairul Ahsan 29 July 2013

@ Lyn Paul, Yes, and thanks for sharing your wisdom.

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Khairul Ahsan 29 July 2013

@ Heather Wilkins, Thank you for your comment and sharing the wisdom of life.

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Lyn Paul 25 July 2013

The beauty with ageing is the wisdom. I love it. Thank you

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Heather Wilkins 15 July 2013

your words are so true, but life goes on. as we age so it is said we gain knowledge. I hope so. nice write

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Lasoaphia Quxazs 15 July 2013

You are right, but I would not give my wisdom now for the beauty I was once, because I can see how naive, fearful and timid I was in that time. I treasure the wisdom and strength what I have now.

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Urshula Davis 05 July 2013

hummmmmm... this makes one think. I feel where you're coming from.

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Khairul Ahsan 04 July 2013

Thanks, Marsha, Elena, S.Zaynub and Eloida. Thanks for reading my short poem and putting your kind words here.

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Marsha Cleveland 04 July 2013

Interesting concept! I liked it! :)

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Elena Sandu 02 July 2013

Haha very true. A lot of food for thought in only a few words. Yes I think beauty is everywhere in everything, suppose it is not hard for a strong mind to be one beauty of a kind. Thank you for share, a good poem.

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