Beauty And Brains Comments

An enriching poem/ excellent writing! ! !

very nice.the concept, flow and rhyme is beautiful.liked it.

mindblowing! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! gud comparison. grt rhyming words nice idea apt title hmmmmmm.it seems dat u really hv used ur brain. u r a grt poettess, teacher

well and poignant write...

liked very much comparison of helen and cleopatra how lord Zeus turned into swan.. poetry and myth, poetry and history, poetry and events that turn history, poetry and legends, poetry and religions. you seem to try to touch all in ur poems. thank u for sharing. God bless you

i simply loved the 4th and 5th paragraph...lovely

Very rich in content and concept. Comes across as a breath of fresh air.

compact thoughtful composition! ............fine! .....10+

Hunger and temptation, she willfully desists, Exposure to the sun, she judiciously resists. Carefully, she observes every facet of fashion, Exercising is her biggest passion.....................Yea then u are talking about will power not about intellegence...............and the parameters of beauty varies from time to time and place to place and at same time in different places..............so ultimately it is the brain that matters..............Good Write...........