Thursday, May 31, 2018

Beauty All Around Comments

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Beauty All Around

I walked along the deserted path
Silence surrounded me
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Aqua Flower
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Carl Roussell 02 June 2018

At times it does take effort to see the beauty of the world around you when day to day life builds up too much.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 01 June 2018

Such a heartwarming poem👍👍👍

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Aqua Flower 01 June 2018

So glad you liked it Bernard! Nature is facinating!

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Gajanan Mishra 31 May 2018

beauty surrounds all, here in life

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Aqua Flower 01 June 2018

Yes, I'm glad you agree! If only people would slow down and realize that it is right in front of them, everywhere! Thank you for your comment!

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Sandra Feldman 31 May 2018

Beautiful thoughts and beautifully written But unfortunately, Not All, have poets' souls To be, by the world's beauty, Smitten Excellent, flowing work. A pleasure to read.

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Aqua Flower 01 June 2018

Thank you! Such a nice comment, Sandra! I am happy to share my thoughts with others that appreciate them as you do!

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Robert Murray Smith 31 May 2018

Rainbow Flower, when the veil is lifted we see. A well crafted poem with great imagery. Balanced on its own beauty.+++10

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Aqua Flower 01 June 2018

I like the visual you wrote of the veil lifting. Some people go through life with the veil and don't truly see the beauty around them They are so busy they forget to even breathe. We now practice breathing here in my country......callled meditating. We take time outs to do it but it should be something that we naturally do all the time! I'm sure I was meditating at the moment when I actually was walking down that path!

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