Friday, February 2, 2007

Beauty Comments

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Being born alive marks for beauty itself
every pair of eyes that blinks when amaze
a set of ears that is tuned to sweet lullaby
unique hands and feet that hold balance
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Marvin Brato Sr
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Theresa Moore 17 May 2007

The creation of life is a miracle in and of itself. You describe this blessing very well. Written with true appreciation.

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Lin B 06 March 2007

Life is amazing. Being alive is a blessing. You capture this sentiment wonderfully. Love it. ~Linley~

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Ana x 05 February 2007

reminds me some who of babies, when first they are born and all the family stare at them in wonder, the little toes, the noise, .... yep, i agree with u with this poem, and i think that all the creatures are pieces of true art, that is made by God, nice use for the words, It's the first time that i read a poem about this topic: ]

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Marvin Brato Sr

Marvin Brato Sr

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