Sunday, March 13, 2022

Beauty Comments

Rating: 5.0

Many a rainbow appears
and disappears in the sky
Flowers abundant bloom
and wither in the garden
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Parameswaran Nair Damodaran Nair
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 15 September 2022

'Sweet dreams cannot cross water lines of sleep's ocean', beautiful line from a wonderful poem. Revisiting this great poem full of compelling images.

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Thanks a lot dear RMJ, ephimerality of earthly beauty hurts me

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Indira Renganathan 26 March 2022

An intelligent write on our transient life.....interesting 5*****

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Thank you very much my neighbor poetess

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 March 2022

A thought provoking poem well expressed and crafted. Everything on earth is ephemeral like life itself. Yet, the happiness we derive from the beauty and wonders of existence will create memories that will last forever. A beautiful poem with great images.

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Thank you very much dear RMJ. I am very very happy that you have made your appearance after an eclipse of a short while.i was thinking of sending you a message.

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Avy 15 March 2022

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Unnikrishnan E S 15 March 2022

May I invite you to read my new poem "New Moon ", dedicated to you sir.

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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 15 March 2022

Awesome........ Really thoughtful poem 5****

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Thank you dear Asim Nehal

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Unnikrishnan E S 15 March 2022

4. So, "A Thing of Beauty Is A Joy For Ever". I hope you agree.

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Yes, Unnikrushnan, beauty is ephemeral but the joy it creates is everlasting

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Unnikrishnan E S 15 March 2022

3. And an "Absent Moon" makes a New Moon Night brighter than all, in igniting our expectation of the moon in a pale crescent next night. So beautiful.

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Unnikrishnan E S 15 March 2022

2. Beauty of an individual flower may have a short life. But that beauty has been made immortal by your lovely poem. And more flowers bloom. More rainbows appear. There is moon on the skies on all the days of a month, but one. (Contd)

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Unnikrishnan E S 15 March 2022

Fantastic poem. But I disagree with you in your observation "beauty on earth is ephemeral ". Your words reflect the poem "Veena Poovu " by Kumaran Aasan. (Contd)

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Avy 14 March 2022

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 14 March 2022

the poem is as beautiful as the flowers in a garden. Lovely poem dear Poet.......10

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 14 March 2022

It's so true that everything changes, even beauty. This fine poem is in my favorites.

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Thank you very much dear poet

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Bri Edwards 13 March 2022

just a suggestion: 'Many rainbows appear and disappear' Or 'Many a rainbow appears and disappears' bri : )

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Yes dear Bri, you are grammatically correct. But sometimes our enthusiasm surpasses the gramsTidal stringecies

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Bharati Nayak 13 March 2022

A great poem ---Let me quote -'Sweet dream can't cross water lines of sleep's ocean Bliss can't stay ceaseless, Beauty on earth is ephemeral

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Thanks a lot dear poetess

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Anil Kumar Panda 13 March 2022

The second stanza is very meaningful. Everything on this planet is going to lose its existence someday. Nice write. .

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Thank you very much dear AKP

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 March 2022

A truthful write. What you have mentioned in the note area, the last line of this poem is true.5 stars and to my favorite.

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A lot of sincere thanks dear Dr.Dillip

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