Sunday, March 18, 2018

Beauty Comments

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I imagine you,
I feel you,
and I wish you could enter me.
When I see myself smiling
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Akhtar Jawad
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Hans Vr 22 March 2018

Wow, this is really poetry at its best. A look at beauty from the poets heart from a very special corner. Excellent!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 March 2018

Self smiling image with reflection motivates mind. Beauty is flying and beauty is captured in mirror. An amazing and interesting poem is beautifully penned to explain the real beauty perceived...10

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 19 March 2018

A thought provoking poem. The inherent beauty of a person could never be duplicated even your own reflection in the mirror. I hope I got the underlying meaning of this piece.. An amazing write that evokes a reader to think and dig deeper into the words that the poet perused.10

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Valsa George 19 March 2018

The feeling of self admiration on seeing the beautiful image reflected in the mirror is beautifully captured!

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Khalida Bano Ali 19 March 2018

A beautiful poem, silence is really beautiful.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 March 2018

your lips move like that of mine, you say something, but I could never listen to you! Flying kisses to your lips that remain silent........here is the beauty I found. Beautiful. Thanks.

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Nudershada Cabanes 18 March 2018

Beautiful poem Sir Akhtar.

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