Duty is beauty
Where it is approved
Beauty is sweety
When it is loved
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Thank you for the invitation to read your poem. I find it delightful and refreshing, but take particular notice of the word sweety (use here as adjective) and would prefer some other synonym to it, as it means sweetheart (noun) or an informal address for dear (also a noun) . Perhaps sincerity would be good, as Beauty is sincerity. Just my thoughts.
You are right. That is how I love Everything, I mean Everything and that is why I am always happy.
Always surrender your beauty without calculation, without words. Shut up. And she says about you: I am. And comes with a thousand senses, finally arrives each. in The Book of Images, Rainer Maria Rilke, Book Second Part.
a beautiful poem about beauty. beauty is in the eyes of the beholder lovely write