Beauty Comments

...i just fall in love with your poetry. Read mine 'Real beauty'.

Yup! another thing of beauty again... You said it wonderfully. :) I loved it man..!

a great poem, i loved it

true most people in this world only look at the outside and forget about the inside.

I really like this poem as beauty is whatever we deem it to be. You have such great insight into things profound...blessings

I really like this poem also.

Your beauty is indeed beauty. a nice poem

Wow I can't believe you are new to poetry- this is such a good poem! Bravo!

a display of beautiful thoughts using simple words..a message worth it! ! ! nice write :)

hmmm.... i've read quite a lot poems now... i just wanna ask u, y don't u try using rhyme scheme? it touches more.. :)

Fantastic write! I love it! Keep it up! :)

a brave attempt to describe beauty! i shall not say it is a definition of beauty. yes, old poets also said that beauty a physical beauty is temporary, time destroys everything but the beauty of the soul, the beauty of the intellect may last longer and yes the beauty of mother's love is immortal and a beauty is a joy forever is an old line used in poems...you should use new phrase....otherwise this poem a good piece of art, i like your brevity, copactness and power of thinking..kudoes to you..........