You were in my dreams again last night
And they were plentiful.
You pulled me close and held me tight
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this is well constructed, and tenderly expressed. I think the rhyming and repeating line works well in this poem.
If I voted, which I don't, this would get 10. Just the right amount of rhyme, just the right amount of repetition, and you stop when you've said it all.
Loved this piece.Try 'We Are'.