Saturday, June 20, 2009

Beauty Comments

Rating: 3.8

You were in my dreams again last night
And they were plentiful.

You pulled me close and held me tight
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Black Mendilouche
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Sally Plumb Plumb 09 March 2010

Loved this piece.Try 'We Are'.

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Frank Bana 28 July 2009

Superb! ! This flows so well...

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Lillian Thomas 27 June 2009

this is well constructed, and tenderly expressed. I think the rhyming and repeating line works well in this poem.

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Sally Carter 22 June 2009

Beautiful and sensitive. I like this very much.

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Paul Hansford 21 June 2009

If I voted, which I don't, this would get 10. Just the right amount of rhyme, just the right amount of repetition, and you stop when you've said it all.

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