Friday, April 17, 2009

Beauty Comments

Rating: 3.0

orange haze keeps the long stickly grass dry
swaying back and forth in the hot breeze
it's beautiful
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Kale Beaudry
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Safa Sulaiman 07 July 2009

rare thought put into words...good one!

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Chitra - 27 April 2009

a profound dimension to beauty.. a great write

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Eyan Desir 24 April 2009

This is complicated............................

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Raj Arumugam 22 April 2009

real and ironic - and accomplished lines...

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Indira Renganathan 17 April 2009

A poem of beauty and caution....good watch10

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Ramesh T A 17 April 2009

Beauty and danger many fail to notice indeed! Your poem points out this very well! Nice!

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Kale Beaudry

Kale Beaudry

Vancouver, BC, Canada
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