Tuesday, March 31, 2009

Beauty Comments

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Beauty, what a sight to hold
Yet your heart is so cold

Beauty the greatest treasure
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Jake Samuelson
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Saane Pahulu 13 October 2009

this is honestly TRUE! ! ! thats why its sometimes an advantage :) :)

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Annie Girl 21 August 2009

well done... they way u've described beauty its really really good.... it can be a gift or a curse...

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Kerrie Owens 23 April 2009

Absolutely fantastic poem Jake, well done. I like the way youve detailed it as though its a man/woman with a very cold heart but beauty to die for. Nice Job.

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