Beauty, what a sight to hold
Yet your heart is so cold
Beauty the greatest treasure
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well done... they way u've described beauty its really really good.... it can be a gift or a curse...
Absolutely fantastic poem Jake, well done. I like the way youve detailed it as though its a man/woman with a very cold heart but beauty to die for. Nice Job.
this is honestly TRUE! ! ! thats why its sometimes an advantage :) :)