Sunday, November 9, 2008

Beauty Comments

Rating: 4.8

(dedicated to Niken Kusuma Wardani)

Restore the tresses
With hair breakthroughs
...
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Ahmad Shiddiqi
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Raj Nandy 22 March 2009

We are born rich in beauty to blossom and bloom, But keep getting poorer as we grow; True beauty lies in our mind and heart, We always reap what we sow! - composed by Raj Nandy as a compliment! A perfect ten!

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Riquetta Elliott 21 February 2009

A very lovely poem Ahmad. Very nice.

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Blue Eyes 27 December 2008

very nice poem keep the gud work it really deserves a 10.

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Sebastine Humaemo 17 December 2008

simple, short and a pleasant way to speak about beauty....regards sebastine...

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 18 November 2008

A beautiful symphony of words....!

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 17 November 2008

a short but sweet poem.i enjoy it.

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Juan Carlos Abeti 16 November 2008

good again, always a pleasure to read your work...

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Anjali Sinha 14 November 2008

hey another nice one i like that 'cut the frills and get back' regards anjuXXXXX10

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Ershad Mazumder 14 November 2008

I like small/short poem with deep meaning. Thanks a lot for sharing it with us.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 14 November 2008

Ammmmmazing! ............well written....10+

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Lynda Robson 14 November 2008

Concise and clear, well written Lynda

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Adeiza A. 12 November 2008

Nicely expressed Ahmed. This is good

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Tapas Baidya 12 November 2008

Simply beautiful. Thanks for sharing such natural beauty. Tapas Baidya, Kolkata, India.

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Ben Gieske 11 November 2008

Has a nice crisp rhythm to it.

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Niken Kusuma Wardani 10 November 2008

Hi, Tks for yr thought Ahmad, i like the way you describe beauty. I wish i have even a slice of yr idea to knitted the words and make a luxurious outfit to pay my gratitude to you.

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Airda Jones 10 November 2008

Kind, simple words for a kind, simple beauty...very well done

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Sandra Fowler 10 November 2008

Charming picture of a naturally beautiful woman.10 for you. Kind regards, Sandra

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C T Heart 10 November 2008

natural beauty is the most captivating part...especially the inner most one is what matters. a 10.

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 10 November 2008

True beauty needs no Adornment, very true Ahmad... Andrew 10

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Fay Slimm 10 November 2008

Short and compelling this piece - I liked the phrases and the opening line is good too. Well done Ahmad.

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Ahmad Shiddiqi

Ahmad Shiddiqi

Semarang, Central Java, Indonesia
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