Friday, May 16, 2008

Beauty Comments

Rating: 4.5

Sighting her in opposite mirror
Like a boundless poetic mirage
Finding no words I surrender
To the beauty unfolding its image
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Vidyadhar Durgekar
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Reshma Ramesh 24 September 2008

very beautiful indeed......and thanks for the compliments

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Kholekile Monakali 14 September 2008

if you want to see beauty you will find it to nowhere but to yourself., , , , , , , ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Shalini Kts 29 August 2008

beauty beautifully described... short and nice poem

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Subbaraman N V 23 July 2008

Can beauty be better described! Congratulations!

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Moushumi moushumi 15 June 2008

Hi, i really appreciate how ur feeling translated into this poem.i'm just trying to express my fantasy into poem & i require ur moral help to teach me how to write a poem like that of yours

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Sandra Fowler 13 June 2008

Very romantic. An unforgettable moment which time cannot take from you. Thank you for sharing your fine art with your readers. Warm regards, Sandra

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Greenwolfe 1962 30 May 2008

I thought this was written too well. Sometimes, a poet, will reach a very great height in some lines and fall a little short in others. This writer has done just that. The form and substance of the poem is perfection. The greatest poems are only one or two verses in structure, because that is all that is required. He meets all the standard requirements. The writing was excellant but not perfect. I gave it a 9. Honestly, it is better than most tens; but because this is so good in general, its specific imperfection is clearer than that of most poems. GW62

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Thad Wilk 26 May 2008

Ahh but you have described her beauty aptly, a very delightful read, indeed! ! ! *10*! ! Best regards, Friend Thad

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Usha Pisharody 21 May 2008

Simply, lucidly, tenderly and warmly presented, the 'beauty'! A lovely poem!

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Alison Cassidy 21 May 2008

Tis said that 'beauty is in the eye of the beholder.' This 'beholder' certainly has shining eyes - and a tenderhearted pen too. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Duncan Wyllie 21 May 2008

She sounds amazing, so worth the read here, thankyou! ! Love duncan X

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David Desantis 21 May 2008

wow, she must be very beautiful...nice one

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Abha Sharma 16 May 2008

Your lines themselves convey the boundless beauty of words without the simile metaphor n metonymy the fathomless beauty is conveyed… Abha

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Kesav Easwaran 16 May 2008

Boundless poetic mirage! Well said, Vidyadhar! Since times unknown poets are after this mirage…the way you sight the beauty of your ‘her’ in this poem is really beautiful! Ten, for sure!

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