Sunday, December 21, 2008

Beautifully Unknown Comments

Rating: 3.5

Cloudy days are some of her favorite
The only thing missing is the rain to kiss her face
She walks thinking of everything and nothing at the same time
One of the worst feelings in the world
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Vernon Eaker 22 January 2009

I first must say that I am not very knowledgeable as to the proper terms frequently used in poetry, and I am not sure what style this is, my guess would be free form, either way it is not the style I am accustomed to so I can not help with structure I can say that I understand it all to well, I can feel the emotion and the torment and the sense of shame expressed in your words. and to me that's poetry.very nice I give it a (7)

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Greenwolfe 1962 21 January 2009

Your name is appropriate for this piece. Beautifully Unknown should be its name as well. There is no clue about her. She is in pain. That is all I know. Beyond that, I can't tell you what I think. I have no information. GW62

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