Beautifully Hurt Comments

And smile as my pain slowly drains Rachel Ann Butler

This 'beautifully hurt' is beautifully written..

reading your poem down and enjoying, happy when it ended in a smile. very good

I like this poem, it reminds me my teenage. Very hard reaction and successful slow down.

This is so strong a poem. I hope you don't really hit your head. Get pillows and get the pain and anger out this way. Excellent work! Karin Anderson

strong words for a strong poem. powerful and beautiful...10!

lines penned with mixed emotions...........a complete combination of love, care mixed with depart n tears...........10+++ sebastine

ahh Sania much poignant write.....such a painful lines, made me freezed for a sec.........te way yu ended the last line s awesome....lines with feelings straight from the heart.....10+++ sebastine

smiling out the pain...yes...that is the best way to heal a wound...especially a love wound...words beautifully expressive, Sania...nice write...10

Good strong write Sania...well done...thank you