Beautifully Broken Comments

i can tell this poem is straight from the heart so i gave it a 10

Beautifully Broken.. shaped by the wind. wait i know this one. don't tell me. Gov't Mule! or miss Simpson's play-off-their-title-pop-song-gar-bage.. no offense meant. keep writing. this had passion. or frisson. Sus~

I really liked this poem great job I like the last lines give it that punch in the stomache feeling. Lylyanna