I saw it in your eyes
under that disguise
no matter how you tried
i knew that you had lied
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i'd call that 'sweet-painfulness', it reminds me of a place i've been to...nice work!
Hi Carike... I'm just stoppin' by to letcha know that I found this poem charming with awesome flux and rhythm. Thank you for sharing! Ciao, Kristin!
Baie mooi - ek is nie altyd mal oor rym nie, maar jy doen dit 'eloquently' en met 'style'...