Monday, July 10, 2006

Beautifully Broken Comments

Rating: 5.0

I saw it in your eyes
under that disguise
no matter how you tried
i knew that you had lied
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Carike Klokow
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Jurietta Duraan 11 April 2008

Baie mooi - ek is nie altyd mal oor rym nie, maar jy doen dit 'eloquently' en met 'style'...

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Lungelo Mbatha 16 November 2006

i'd call that 'sweet-painfulness', it reminds me of a place i've been to...nice work!

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Kristin Davis 10 July 2006

Hi Carike... I'm just stoppin' by to letcha know that I found this poem charming with awesome flux and rhythm. Thank you for sharing! Ciao, Kristin!

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Carike Klokow

Carike Klokow

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