Sunday, October 30, 2005

Beautiful World Comments

Rating: 4.2

Young lovers entwined on the grass
On a beautiful hot summer's day;
Weary new parents breaking into a smile
As they watch their kids giggle and play.
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Vanessa Brown
COMMENTS
Ernestine Northover 17 November 2005

Another sweet flowing poem Vanessa, a very enjoyable read. Sincerely Ernestine

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***** ********* 08 November 2005

I agree Vanessa, you are a very good writer and poet and this world is full of wonder, if you choose to see! 10 from Tai Chi Italy, I like rhyme you see? lol

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Simon Whild 07 November 2005

A very musical poem, flows very well and put me right there with you. Well done.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar 07 November 2005

I've chanced upon another brilliant writer. thanks for sharing. I love your 'Beautiful World'

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Ivy Christou 07 November 2005

wow.. You've done a brilliant job in this! I don't know which image was more beautiful.. all of them were part of our beautiful world! HBH

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Joy Vanderhelm 06 November 2005

What a wonderful way to end my day! Thank you! It's so nice to get connected to other people through their writing. Keep it up!

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Sallie Howson 05 November 2005

amen to that! beautifully descriptive poem

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Amanda Lukas 30 October 2005

Beautiful poem. We do live in a beautiful world.

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