Tuesday, November 18, 2014

Beautiful Thieves Comments

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Keeping my beauty completely intact,
The lights of my mind reflect and refract,
The virtue of an image I see all rounds,
The beauty of children the sweetness of sounds,
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Loke Kok Yee 07 January 2018

Pleasantly rhymed and and fun to read. Thank you sir.

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Valsa George 21 November 2014

Children being closer to God can easily steal His love, where as we grown ups have no such access to Him as we are manacled by the chains of our own making! Quite a meaningful write!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 November 2014

I wish I could be a beautiful thief! But I am imprisoned in a cage of belief! Playing with children is definitely fun and joy. Beautifully presented children poem as per citation of topic.

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Khalida Bano Ali 18 November 2014

Children are universal beauty.........10

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