Thursday, November 5, 2009

Beautiful Stranger Comments

Rating: 3.4

I see you every night in my dreams,
Oh how real this love seems!
In my dreams your so amazing,
During the day you have me dazing.
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Sarah Reamey
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Bharati Nayak 30 August 2015

There is a clash between dream and reality.What we see in our dreams as so beautiful can find later that it is not what we dreamt .But we keep our search for that beautiful stranger, the unrealised dream

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Ramesh T A 30 August 2015

Beautiful stranger may be seen in dreams but such a one is rare to find in reality!

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Rajnish Manga 30 August 2015

Lovely poem, Sarah. These beautiful strangers do not appear to be the figment of imagination but real ones in flesh and blood: In my dreams your so amazing, During the day you have me dazing.

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Kim Barney 30 August 2015

Very nice, Sarah, and congratulations on having it select as poem of the day! Make it even better by fixing a few minor glitches: line 3: YOU'RE instead of YOUR line 7: EVERY DAY instead of EVERYDAY last line: capitalize i'll (make it I'll) Well done! Keep on writing!

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Dr.subhendu Kar 19 February 2010

wake from my dreams and feel like I know you, ..............yet so soft and mellowed, quite amazing

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Melanie Johnson 11 December 2009

This is beautiful! ! I dream a lot and about this very thing. Well done girl!

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Marieta Maglas 12 November 2009

I wake from my dreams and feel like I know you nice surrealistic poem

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Sarah Hamid 05 November 2009

well done, it's good poem with simple words, i wish ur dreams come true. keep writing

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