Your cute and innocent smile
Makes me forget who I am
And you make me fragile
You make me lose my mind
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You are so captivated by her looks and you have penned beautifully your feelings. You could even make a beautiful song out of it. Happy for you.
the poem depicted beautifully how a lover's mind works... simple yet heart touching.
Short and sweet drop! ! Love is flowing thick from lines. Liked it.
a lad's passion on a maiden is seen in this poem. good
hhhmm who's the stranger? haha