Thursday, August 20, 2015

Beautiful Stranger Comments

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Your cute and innocent smile
Makes me forget who I am
And you make me fragile
You make me lose my mind
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JR Cuyam
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Grace Galeon 23 August 2015

hhhmm who's the stranger? haha

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Rachel Butler 20 August 2015

A youths write with the power of the now! Good write

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nice one hummmmmmmmmm.

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Paul Sebastian 20 August 2015

You are so captivated by her looks and you have penned beautifully your feelings. You could even make a beautiful song out of it. Happy for you.

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Sanjukta Nag 20 August 2015

the poem depicted beautifully how a lover's mind works... simple yet heart touching.

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Anil Kumar Panda 20 August 2015

Short and sweet drop! ! Love is flowing thick from lines. Liked it.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 20 August 2015

a lad's passion on a maiden is seen in this poem. good

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JR Cuyam

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