Beautiful Poison Comments

An astute observation on people's behavior on the effects of abused substances. Many talented and great people's lives are wasted due to addiction and abuse. A beautifully crafted and well executed write. Very informative too. Five Stars! ! ! Thank you, Shaun.

But when both were taken together, A dramatic change in one could see. An ultimate and foolish final high, Black lipped escaping forever reality. A great poem on human condition. Thank you dear poet. tony

Last line powerful. O yea!