Wednesday, October 28, 2015

Beautiful Philosophy Comments

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One thing in the world never can be bought;
This is the sacred one, keep that in your thoughts.
And love is that thing I'm talking about
And you must choose a single one in the crowd
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Sanket Adhikari
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Souren Mondal 04 November 2015

'There is no ego in my love, it is not satanic; My love is true for you, and it is platonic.' ____________________________ Interesting ending to the poem with a couplet that suits the title of your poem... Thanks for sharing Sanket..

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Hazel Durham 01 November 2015

Original, fresh and beautiful write, love is the most precious emotion we have we must cherish our beloved forever!

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Wes Vogler 30 October 2015

I have no doubt this declaration is sincere ... but you MUST toss out the last two lines. A re-write will improve the whole immensely. You have a talent but you must work a little harder. thanks... Wes

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Edmund Strolis 29 October 2015

The sentiment is beautiful to say I love you in a crowd and be glad to say it loud. Wonderful writing.

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Sanket Adhikari 29 October 2015

Thank You so much..

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Kelly Kurt 28 October 2015

The most popular theme in poetry. Nicely done, Sanket

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Sanket Adhikari 28 October 2015

Thank You, That's a starting.I'll try to improve myself through the course of time.

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