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One thing in the world never can be bought;
This is the sacred one, keep that in your thoughts.
And love is that thing I'm talking about
And you must choose a single one in the crowd
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Original, fresh and beautiful write, love is the most precious emotion we have we must cherish our beloved forever!
I have no doubt this declaration is sincere ... but you MUST toss out the last two lines. A re-write will improve the whole immensely. You have a talent but you must work a little harder. thanks... Wes
The sentiment is beautiful to say I love you in a crowd and be glad to say it loud. Wonderful writing.
Thank You, That's a starting.I'll try to improve myself through the course of time.
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'There is no ego in my love, it is not satanic; My love is true for you, and it is platonic.' ____________________________ Interesting ending to the poem with a couplet that suits the title of your poem... Thanks for sharing Sanket..