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A heart once broken leads one's eyes to roam,
Just as mine did one Winter day,
My youth ravished eyes swept the room,
And saw her standing, a beautiful cliché;
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Truly a very beautiful piece written. Full of mystery very well done.
A very mysterious write full of longing and suspense...an enchanting poem. Great work, Alexander! Caroline
BEAUTIFUL! ! Wow she seems sooo mysterious. I hope you find her one day.... ^_^ the way you described the whole situation made me feel like i was right there...the suspense of him having the courage to go over to her but then her not be there? ? nice Tyease
wow, , this is the great one too! love it, , feels a cupid shot his arrow, , love on the first sight? ? ? hehehe, , , clear and simple... but strong feel... love it so much... Naru Kaede, ,
the heart needs wants more than the body it is a dream not be for filled
Oh yes! We all looked great at seventeen! LOL Take a look at her mother and you will see what she will look like in the years ahead! LOL Just kidding around with you! Beautiful words indeed. Ten! Linda Across the sea!
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Thank you so much for commenting on mine! Yours was fun to read and I gave it also an 8!