Thursday, June 23, 2011

Beautiful, Perfect And Hypocrite Comments

Rating: 5.0

Her smile so charming
princess with a fierce king
subtlely mean and diplomatic
she slams my ego but still leaves me blushing
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Adedolapo Olisa
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 23 June 2011

Outstanding poem. Wonderfully conceived. Great imagery with nice sentiments. Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Akmal

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Adedolapo Olisa

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Ilorin, Kwara state.
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