Handsome man can win queen’s heart
As there lies wisdom with brilliance as an art
Same way beautiful womanhood can play impossible
The war can be won with simple but beautiful smile
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the true beauty lies deep within the heart. a great write
apocalyptic Shang Clevenger33 minutes ago This is a very enticing and mysterious poem. I very much enjoyed it. Comment +1 Good
Scott Moulthrop19 minutes ago I really enjoyed this philosphical piece, though several of your comparisons give me pause. At the beginning you seem to be stating that we are fixated on surfaces, making our judgements. Then it seems to say we give our surfaces their solidity intentionally, with the goal of hiding darkness. Lastly, you turn to things we have lost, or will lose, to imagination itself and end with emptiness. I think though, you miss the point that we are striving for a perfection we can never reach, an idea of happiness. And, perhaps, that is all the meaning and reason we need. Comment +1 nice
Anna Carter40 minutes ago I liked this, made me think of the saying, things aren't always as they seem!
Handsome man can win queen’s heart As there lies wisdom with brilliance as an art
Like this poem very much in life or next