Friday, May 4, 2007

Beautiful Night Comments

Rating: 4.5

Beautiful night, how the stars, they so clearly shine
And the joyful moon how it mirrors back my smile
Oh, beautiful night, you're good to a heart like mine
Oh, beautiful night, you've made this long road worthwhile
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Danny Speicher
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Erin S 13 February 2008

Loved this poem! keep writing!

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Erin B 14 May 2007

Sort of written in sonnet form, excluding the syllable rule, very nice, I love the rhyme scheme, keep writing.

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Danny Speicher

Danny Speicher

Lawrence, KS
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