Beautiful Night Comments

The Night is still beautiful My dreams are still alive Waiting for a new dawn A new beginning! thank God that you end with hope. nice conclusion always in ur poems i read. wait for a new dawn.. it is going to come.. a real love in life. God will grant to u.

Jilt and poseur he is…but your fantastic romance with Night will fill the gap…till you get a befitting one …exceptional passion added in description in portraying night…write more please.. 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

'...promised to be with me Next time when it rains But everything was a lie And he taught me how to cry'... sad an poignant words...love is a cunning game-master Deepthi...often thows you out of the field you unaware...the quoted words constitute the soul of this poem...a 'grieving' soul...10 well composed poem...

Very well written piece

It was a nice poem..with all the beauties of imagination and usage of apt words. Wish you all the best