Wednesday, November 16, 2016

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Black is a happy colour,
For stars shine in the dark sky
Black is a sad colour,
Representative of death and evil
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Esther Kamau 19 November 2016

Nice poem Susan. I love it.

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Earnest Gatuma 19 November 2016

Proficiently penned.....I love it! Thanks for sharing Susan.

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Fabrizio Frosini 16 November 2016

a truly good poem, Susan, and a poignant message. Thanks for sharing and.. welcome!

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Susan Ng'ang'a 18 November 2016

Highly appreciated Fabrizio Frosini

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Chinedu Dike 16 November 2016

An insightful piece of poetry, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. Thanks for sharing Susan.

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Susan Ng'ang'a 18 November 2016

Welcome Feel highly appreciated

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Susan Ng'ang'a 18 November 2016

Thank you Chinedu Dike

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Ahmed Gumaa Siddiek 16 November 2016

This is so nice, girl, I did really like this philosophy of colours. It is a nice piece of poem but your focus had all been on the philosophy rather than poetry. You just need to pay Little attention to rhythm and rhyme. This may add some music.

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Susan Ng'ang'a 18 November 2016

Thank you Sir I will do my best to create rhythm during my next writing

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Tom Billsborough 16 November 2016

Colour is very important in poetry and you've made a very fine poem. Yes, let's all be black! let us use colour in a positive way. I find black eyes very attractive.

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Susan Ng'ang'a 18 November 2016

True Tom By so doing we shall create a conducive environment for mankind Black eyes are outstanding.. Thank you

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 November 2016

Nice poem with the muse of the colour Black. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Susan Ng'ang'a 18 November 2016

Welcome. Thank you!

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