Beautiful Muse Comments

This poem is simply amazing! I've rated it 10/10. 'He imagines that her softness Would sweetly mould into His hands Like ripe fruit.' - A truly poetic diction. 'He feels the heat of creation rise in him And with power and purpose, His eyes break contact as He touches His brush To the canvas..' - An anti climax?

You really were in the zone when you wrote this - fully evocative, - while reading it my heart rate even increased there for a second or two. and the first line is brilliant. - I will also say, (since I am also a moonlight magician) that you employed the powers of misdirection perfectly in this poem. the final line made me feel like a little kid again :)

Transforms something essentially animal into such clever art. Fantastic

What an incredible imagination you have. I could not guess what was going to happen. Thank You

Beautiful. Such awareness.