There they lay watching the rising sun.
No more can night see daylight
than the darkness hide her anymore.
Desiring a new beginning, as the old world
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Passion and Romance exuding and oozing in the backdropp of finest imaginative metaphor…endlessly and relentlessly… Excellent sculpturing in the tune and tone of poetic excellence… ‘…Two hearts joined like the sea and sky with the horizon….’ And it is limitless and unfathomable like Love and Nature’s beauty… Thanks Ma’am… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK
other’s eyes and leaped over the broom into the arms of bliss. … Two hearts joined like the sea and sky with the horizon. witnessed by holy spirit and nature and it has got bleesings for right act too.. beaiutiful write and appriciated...keep writng such beautiful poems....10 read mine bidding farewell... anywhere...butterflies around...mary to marry
'The light of day can’t stay in hiding, As the old world slips away We hold tight… Opening hand and fingers We let go of everything that was...' These lines are deep breath of relief and relaxation. The whole poem is a joyful read indeed. Wonderful write, Almedia........10/10. Regards Naseer
beautiful morning with visible rays of the sun.. beautiful morning to where a sun smiles.. a beautiful morning where lies becomes truths, , the possibility to rise is seen in the first dawn of the day...grace
Sadness flies on the wings of the morning and out of the heart of darkness comes the light.The poem is very well written with beautiful imagery that illuminates a vey pure message that laughter should lie in the sweetness of love and there should be full sharing of pleasures for in the dew of little things the heart finds its morning and is refreashed.
Amazingly expressed piece my lovely...you capture this moment perfectly...Very well written, and with select imagery gives this wonderful poem...a classic touch....brilliant! !
'the light of day can't stay in hiding, as the old world slips away' amazing piece of work! ! ! 10++++
what a passionate poem, so full of expression, really like this one, very well written, thank you: 0)