Monday, June 22, 2009

Beautiful Morning...Witnessed By Whom? Comments

Rating: 5.0

There they lay watching the rising sun.
No more can night see daylight
than the darkness hide her anymore.
Desiring a new beginning, as the old world
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Almedia Knight-Oliver
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Vaughn Bekker 26 May 2010

what a passionate poem, so full of expression, really like this one, very well written, thank you: 0)

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 29 March 2010

Passion and Romance exuding and oozing in the backdropp of finest imaginative metaphor…endlessly and relentlessly… Excellent sculpturing in the tune and tone of poetic excellence… ‘…Two hearts joined like the sea and sky with the horizon….’ And it is limitless and unfathomable like Love and Nature’s beauty… Thanks Ma’am… 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Adeela Naji Abdulla 27 February 2010

OMG! ! its Really Good :)

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 18 September 2009

other’s eyes and leaped over the broom into the arms of bliss. … Two hearts joined like the sea and sky with the horizon. witnessed by holy spirit and nature and it has got bleesings for right act too.. beaiutiful write and appriciated...keep writng such beautiful poems....10 read mine bidding farewell... anywhere...butterflies around...mary to marry

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Obinna Eruchie 31 August 2009

A beautifully expressed poem, Almedia.

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Raj Arumugam 15 August 2009

a poem with smooth flow of lines, Almedia...

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 05 July 2009

'The light of day can’t stay in hiding, As the old world slips away We hold tight… Opening hand and fingers We let go of everything that was...' These lines are deep breath of relief and relaxation. The whole poem is a joyful read indeed. Wonderful write, Almedia........10/10. Regards Naseer

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Lady Grace 29 June 2009

beautiful morning with visible rays of the sun.. beautiful morning to where a sun smiles.. a beautiful morning where lies becomes truths, , the possibility to rise is seen in the first dawn of the day...grace

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Sameer Ahmed 29 June 2009

Sadness flies on the wings of the morning and out of the heart of darkness comes the light.The poem is very well written with beautiful imagery that illuminates a vey pure message that laughter should lie in the sweetness of love and there should be full sharing of pleasures for in the dew of little things the heart finds its morning and is refreashed.

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~ Jon London ~ 29 June 2009

Amazingly expressed piece my lovely...you capture this moment perfectly...Very well written, and with select imagery gives this wonderful poem...a classic touch....brilliant! !

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Vijay Sai R 26 June 2009

very impressive! ! .....

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Suicidal Magic 26 June 2009

'the light of day can't stay in hiding, as the old world slips away' amazing piece of work! ! ! 10++++

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