Saturday, October 6, 2012

Beautiful Moon Comments

Rating: 5.0

There are billions of stars in the sky
There are trillions of lamps on earth
None glows like the beautiful moon
At your uprise the world glows
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Babatunde Aremu
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Tom Allport 31 May 2017

a poem that shines as bright as it's contents of reverend light? ..........well written.

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Sylvaonyema Uba 12 December 2016

Nice piece on nature. I invite you to comment on my poems too.

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Francie Lynch 29 August 2014

Nice imagery. I really don't see the similarities between our two poems. Your's is a celebration of beauty. Mine is the loss of such. Nice write, all the same. Watch the typos.

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A spiritually beautiful poem that satisfies the soul.

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Captain Cur 15 June 2014

In Bichi, Kano, Nigeria the moon was softly glaring millions more stood peering your thought in words keep sharing

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Smoky Hoss 01 November 2013

It is amazing to scan the cosmos, and find meaning, and mystery everywhere. This is a beautiful poem.

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Babalola Augustine Adeola 06 October 2012

Constant form of creation indeed. Good job my ògá. Thanks for sharing

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