Monday, July 18, 2005
Beautiful Mistake Comments
Rating: ★3.5
She sits around all day
Basking in sadness and in her tears
He's the only one on her mind
He's the only one who can save her from herself
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Jerry Hughes
30 July 2005
Indeed Victoria, passion personified. However, I'd take Lawernce's poetic advice seriously. He's a master. Cheers, and keep writing. J H
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7/28/2025 2:16:24 PM # 1.0.0
I like this one...although....sunshing? Typo for sunshine. Those last two lines are just perfect...I'd scale down some of theother lines, though. The longer ones but that's just me. Doesn't mean it's right. I enjoyed this poem...very much.