Friday, July 20, 2012

Beautiful Mind Comments

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A beautiful mind is a precious thing to waste,
equally so is a beautiful face,
true beauty comes from deep within,
be confident in yourself and you will know where to begin,
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Andre Brown
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Robin Bennett 20 July 2012

nice to read an uplifting piece! You did a very nice job of getting your message across through your words. You chose a nice easy rhyme scheme that didn't overwhelm the piece. It has a nice gentle flow to it.

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