Beautiful Love Poem by Lely Atempa

Beautiful Love



What is love?
Is it nice or beautiful?

But is it love when you cheat?

Love, love, love it's beautiful I guess
Love is one thing but hate is another.

Is it love when you cheat on him/her?
Is it love when you ask him/her for money?

Like a dog you beg and obey.

Love is when you care for each other
Also to be there for each other

It's not love when you

Cheat,

Your mean to each other,

Or

Beg for things like an animal

It's not love when you don't even appreciate each others value.
Or care about each others physical and mentally

I never experienced love
I hope I do when I get older

Right now I'm not looking for love
I don't want to go through the drama, pain and suffer.

Love is like a beautiful rose

My family gives me love
And that's all I need.

Beautiful Love
Wednesday, June 13, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: honesty,love and dreams,opinion
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Like I said im 15 and I wrote this in the 5th grade and I found it inside one of my old books. which is ironic because I feel in love and get my heartbroken by the things I wrote down that I said were not love. I got cheated on and my old bf didn't appreciate me or my values and he didn't know my worth. But I know my worth and how i should be treated so that's why I will always keep my families love close to me.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bernard F. Asuncion 14 June 2018

Kathy, such a well crafted poem👍👍👍

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