As I walked down the steps,
my eyes caught your innocence.
The moisture on your lips
inviting to be kissed.
...
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the best of your collection. Beautiful flow and word selection. But in my mind you shall remain forever as my beautiful little stranger Stunning.
Very beautiful Anoop! A little stranger can do lot of changes in your life? Take care.
I like the images you have created here - great ending to this too. Justine
Ive felt this way many times, you've expressed my feelings well! Great poem
Anoop, this a whimsical little poem. It has sincerity and warmth and some beautiful images particularly 'my eyes caught your innocence' - and the last line added depth to the essentially descriptive nature of the piece. Warmly Alison