Saturday, October 7, 2006

Beautiful Little Stranger Comments

Rating: 3.2

As I walked down the steps,
my eyes caught your innocence.
The moisture on your lips
inviting to be kissed.
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Anoop Lokkur
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Alison Cassidy 07 October 2006

Anoop, this a whimsical little poem. It has sincerity and warmth and some beautiful images particularly 'my eyes caught your innocence' - and the last line added depth to the essentially descriptive nature of the piece. Warmly Alison

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Daniel Tyler 07 October 2006

the best of your collection. Beautiful flow and word selection. But in my mind you shall remain forever as my beautiful little stranger Stunning.

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Nimal Dunuhinga 07 October 2006

Very beautiful Anoop! A little stranger can do lot of changes in your life? Take care.

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R H 07 October 2006

I like the images you have created here - great ending to this too. Justine

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Your Sword Vs My Pen 07 October 2006

Ive felt this way many times, you've expressed my feelings well! Great poem

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Anoop Lokkur

Anoop Lokkur

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