Wednesday, June 12, 2013

Beautiful Lie Comments

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My beautiful lie
Bright and incandescent like the stars
And just as unattainable
Will you lead me through darkness?
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Kelly Seale 15 June 2013

Even as the falcon streaches her wings for the first time to flight, no hesitation for what lay beyond, nature's gift... to soar. You must not fear the truth, nor believe in lies you tell yourself. You are Beautiful, inside and out. Fear not hurt, nor shy away from pain... this is how we know we are alive. Another Beautiful Write.; -) Kelly.

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..... W@king Up..... 14 June 2013

Some nice random bits of rhyme in there :) lovely poem. Indeed one's looks do not betray the inside :)

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Neela Nath Das 14 June 2013

Beautiful.You can jump it seems.

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